I’m sending you the ocean in a bottle Open it Let it loose Set it free.
I’m sending you the shoreline In an envelope Let it out With your doubts
Dive in with me.
Nice imagery. Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful words:3 Thank for sharing^^
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super cute, beautiful job!
Happy Thursday, Thanks for the support.
I really liked this sweet little poem. Thanks for sharing.
I read this several times. Enjoyed it more and more
Oh my !! this was breath-stopper !!
Very nice imagery.
Such lovely pictures you painted with this poem. I enjoyed it!
Thank you:)
Wow. I´d like to recieve an ocean in a bottle. Well done
Short and sweet, loved it.
And I agree with ^^ hernamewaslaughter, I would like one too.
Sweet little poem..
Rhyming Waters
–Someone Is Special–
sharp , to the point but sweet
I’ve never read a poem so crisp in words
good jo
simple and well said reminded me of a seashell
Rally Week 29, My Poem
Divinely simple. Nice write here. Love and Light, Sender
So much better than a message in the bottle and directly to the point! Wonderful play on the words.
beside returning favor to poets here, visit and comment for 18 poets NEW from my participants list, and let me know after you are done. Thanks!
At first I thought “Oh no, another poem about the ocean” but I was pleasantly surprised to find that it’s very unique. Loved it.
Thanks so much for all your comments
This one is so cute.
I can feel the sea breeze and smell the salty air. I miss living at the ocean.
Short and simple but lovely at the same time. (:
http://robinelizabeth58.wordpress.com/2010/09/15/youll-always-be-week29poetrally/
I’m sending you the shoreline In an envelope Let it out With your doubts.
wonderful. wonderful. im absolutely speechless.
I will gladly dive in with you. Great poem (:
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Could naything have been more beautiful?
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Nice imagery. Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful words:3 Thank for sharing^^
[...] Windchaswer:http://hernamewaslaughter.wordpress.com/2010/09/07/ocean-in-a-bottle/ [...]
super cute, beautiful job!
Happy Thursday, Thanks for the support.
I really liked this sweet little poem. Thanks for sharing.
I read this several times.
Enjoyed it more and more
[...] Windchaswer:http://hernamewaslaughter.wordpress.com/2010/09/07/ocean-in-a-bottle/ [...]
Oh my !! this was breath-stopper !!
Very nice imagery.
Such lovely pictures you painted with this poem. I enjoyed it!
Thank you:)
Wow. I´d like to recieve an ocean in a bottle.
Well done
Short and sweet, loved it.
And I agree with ^^ hernamewaslaughter, I would like one too.
Sweet little poem..
Rhyming Waters
–Someone Is Special–
sharp , to the point but sweet
I’ve never read a poem so crisp in words
good jo
simple and well said
reminded me of a seashell 
Rally Week 29, My Poem
Divinely simple. Nice write here. Love and Light, Sender
So much better than a message in the bottle and directly to the point! Wonderful play on the words.
beside returning favor to poets here,
visit and comment for 18 poets NEW from my participants list, and let me know after you are done.
Thanks!
At first I thought “Oh no, another poem about the ocean” but I was pleasantly surprised to find that it’s very unique. Loved it.
Thanks so much for all your comments
This one is so cute.
I can feel the sea breeze and smell the salty air. I miss living at the ocean.
Short and simple but lovely at the same time. (:
http://robinelizabeth58.wordpress.com/2010/09/15/youll-always-be-week29poetrally/
I’m sending you the shoreline
In an envelope
Let it out
With your doubts.
wonderful. wonderful. im absolutely speechless.
I will gladly dive in with you. Great poem (:
[...] Windchaser: http://hernamewaslaughter.wordpress.com/2010/09/07/ocean-in-a-bottle/ [...]
Could naything have been more beautiful?
I am prompted to quote ~
“Every foot that walked along a path
Left a telegram written in the stone”
Pablo Neruda
I am:
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2010/09/11/memories-rain/
[...] Windchaswer:http://hernamewaslaughter.wordpress.com/2010/09/07/ocean-in-a-bottle/ [...]
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/27/the-celebrate-poet-of-september-award-nomination-announcement/
please vote for fellow posts,
you are nominated, you win one vote, if you vote for other poets, you win another vote.
upon join the voting, you win at least a runner up award .
Thanks for the attention.
[...] Windchaswer:http://hernamewaslaughter.wordpress.com/2010/09/07/ocean-in-a-bottle/ [...]