Audrey Ashira


In freewrite, poetry, scrap-paper snippets on June 17, 2010 at 10:01 am

Is just like

in a desert
scrubbing at sand
with a brush]

  1. nicely said…
    I will link you in,
    please visit and comment …
    have fun!

  2. Well then, this is quite a find that you and your brush have come up with.

  3. ha. sometimes i feel the same…nice.

  4. Hahaha, this is both grim and witty at the same time.
    Don’t we all know the feeling?

  5. a very familiar feeling..nicely done!

  6. Please return favors to poets who were here,
    Thank you in advance!

  7. Ah the perspective of juxtaposition– nicely done!

  8. fabulous ananolgy

  9. Well said. Thank you for sharing.

  10. it is amazing what gems you find!

  11. Interesting thoughts. Well said.

  12. It’s different but nicely said and done.

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