Audrey Ashira

wind

In freewrite, poetry on June 17, 2010 at 11:30 am

Wind
Rush through the trees
Thrill my heart
Make me want to chase thee
Stroke my hair and tease me

They say that they can’t see you
Neither can I

But why should that matter?

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  1. This poem made my heart squeeze. Fantastic job.

  2. a beautiful feeling swept into such a great line!

  3. succinct but beautifully put.well done.

  4. lovely poem…very true…y shud it matter?? 🙂

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